I am probably the worst at being a bit intimidated by putting my music out there for comments, but here goes... any comments are appreciated!

Oh and word of warning for those that don't like electronic music.. it is electronic music, kinda cyberpunk, perhaps.

Edit: I've temporarily removed this track while I do some changes. I think I've done an OK job at addressing what No Avenger mentioned (such good information!), but I was doing the "Car test" and having a weird issue there that may or may not be vehicle/phone related (I play the music off of my phone). Sometimes it sounds way bassyer than I expected, other times, it doesn't. Just want to figure out which is the true representation of the bass before I replace this on Soundcloud.

 

Last edited: Sep 14, 2023

Nice, I like the whole instrumental part - apart from the drums.
Kick and snare are too upfront, snare also too loud, snare and HH too distorted/clipped - IMHO.

 

Thank you, @No Avenger.. I really respect your advice on this sort of thing, so I'll take a look and try to fi those 3 problems. Mixing / mastering has always been a huge battle for me, so getting advice from someone who knows what they're doing is very valuable. Thanks again!