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love the groove.

 

Awesome man! Maybe next time you could add in a bridge or chorus just to break up the 4 chord cycle. Just my 2 cents anyway.

 

Great sounding drums!! Huge but not too much. Great punch and crack!

 

it sounds good, nice mix. drums remind me of a nine inch nails track, but i can't quite put my finger on which one.

 

Thank you very much for your comments

 

Thank you very much for your comments
I did the drums with steinberg's groove agent

 

thank you all for the good comments!!!!!!!!!

 

It needs AI Trent Reznor voice clone.

 

Nice idea.

At 0:19 - i would delete the "drum intro" and achieve a much more interesting progression. as it is now you sniff yet another boring demo (which its not)

At 1:17 - I would repeat the previous 16 bars without that sudden small pause but i would add a sequence or arpeggio etc over it so its not the same 16 bars as before.

At 1:46 - Skip/replace that crash or shorten it to half or just use reverb on the last beat before it to make the same effect, there insert the 2:16 voice, delete the space between.

Obviously you could do tons of things but that should make it a lot more dynamic at least, (almost) without adding to the existent material.

 

I'm surprised SoundCloud didn't block it.
It's clearly a homage (deliberate or accident) to Paninaro by the Pet Shop Boys.

 

Very nice in general. Like some said before, those drums sound great

 

I'm going to try it

 

thank you all for the good comments!