Can i have some Feedback ?

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  1. BenniTheBlockbuster

    BenniTheBlockbuster Producer

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    Hi , can i have some Feedback for a Latin hip hop Beat that ive Made ?

    I would like to know if the track translates well on your sound systems
    Thank you very much

     
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    sounds good to me. solid mix, good clarity. some more bass wouldn't hurt, especially the funk synth bass part. but that is stylistic anyway.
     
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    sounds good here on yamaha hs5 monitors
     
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    I would've pushed the mids around 1kHz a bit more but other than that, solid.
     
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    On my system the kick sounds a bit too punchy, could be fighting with vocals when they're added.
    So a little notch around 180 Hz could help. Some low shelf boost below that indeed wouldn't hurt, will give the track more balls.
     
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    I would agree with Boomoperator. It does sound good but the ''mix sauce'' sound more like a 2004 Xzibit track. If the goal was for it to sound modern and actual, I think there's some sound and mix decision to be revised. But the balance sounds good here if we're only talking about the mix. There's nothing out of pocket.
     
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    I think you can get away with making the bass a bit louder and with a bit more reverb on that lead sound. Also, why is almost everything center-panned? Makes the track flat as a pancake. Counter-pan tke kazoo to the guitar, make your trap hats jump around a bit.
    Other than that, mix-wise it's good enough.
    This style follows the smiley curve. Plus, mids is where the vocals would be. It intentionally (I think?) has space for them.
     
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    And this. I thought for a second or two it's an LCR mix.

    Would extend higher and there the freqs are occupied.

    Could be, but since my crystal ball dropped recently... :winker:
     
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  10. BenniTheBlockbuster

    BenniTheBlockbuster Producer

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    Thank you very much for all of your Feedback !

    i think only through feedback can you get better at what you do.
    What I find great is that each of you also justifies what you could do better.

    I will consider all your tips next time!

    Really, thank you very much!
     
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    Just to let you know, that wasn't really a crystal ball:dunno:

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    Dafuk.
     
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