Please let me know what you think:

 

Wasn't expecting that.

It's interesting, though my western trained ears might be reacting strangely to some of the transits in melody.

TBH there is more interesting texture and sounds right under the melody for me. The melody seems to distract and frustrate me from picking those up at times. Overall it's well made and we each make different choices, that's artistic intent after all.

Cheers.

 

stoic hopelessness me too

 

Thanks @JMOUTTON @droplet , do you have any feedback on the mix as well and how to improve it?

 

Last edited: Nov 12, 2022

Aside from lowering the lead plucks a little or even getting a transient shaper to lower their attacks a bit to get the bed of pads up a little, I think it has a cool retro sound and wouldn't really do not see a need to change things.

 

I never used a transcient shaper until now: I will have to learn something new, cool.