New song released, any feedback is welcome:



Cheers.
AGWoods.

 

Hi there. Lots of great playing and playing around with synths and stereo imaging - check okay there! Bass. You have a kick presence that is heard, but not a kick OOMPH that should be there. Do you mix in mono? That might set the levels early for a balance. Do you have a powered sub (anything will do there, really) and a reference mix you can flip to on the fly? Always good for getting things there where you want them. No issues with anything else that I can really pick on ... best of luck!

 

Really appreciate your time, thanks!

 

Interesting, good job there.

Some observations:
-The low mids/lows get a bit messy the second half of the song, sounds like a compressor squashing things a bit too much. Check the differences between 0:00-0:20 and 1:42-2:00.
-From 1:40 and on it feels like the song is repeating itself. I think the sequence of parts work well enough, but there's not a lot of variation introduced when they repeat on the sacond half. By variation i mean instruments, effects, stuff like that, nothing structural necessarily,

Aside from that i think this song wants to be a bit wider, but it's not bad as it is.

 

Yes, the second part Is repeating the first, and Gets boring, will investigate methods or some tips to avoid this.
Thanks for your time.

 

Nice tune.
Care to elaborate which soft or hardware synths were used?

 

Reveal Spire in 90% presets from vandalism
SynthMaster 2.9 10%

 

I like it.Kind of a strange track but i like strange tracks that are way off what we regularly hear.There is room for improvement but i wont give any advice because its your track ,you can go a million ways with it,its up to you

 

Very nice job you did on this! 2 thoughts -- I agree with Cardamom that something got lost with the bottom on the kick. It would give it more impact if you could work that out. Second, I really like the tone and general feel of the singer's voice. It would be interesting to hear a mix pass of this with less effect on the vocal. That's probably just a matter of taste, but I found myself wishing I could hear the singer's work a bit more clearly. Minor alterations, in general really good work, congrats!

 

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I like it. Specially all the little modulations of the bass. Good job.
is that singing from a sample pack or is it generated by some kind of synth?

 

The Voice Is emvoice Lucy and sometimes emvoice Keela, There is clearly some robotic feel in the voice.

 

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It's fairly pedantic. Kinda just plods along. I'd have breaks, semi-fills at the end of every 8 bars and full bar breaks, fills at the end of every 16th.

The girl's vocals are out of time in certain areas.

The track could use spicing up with a little more special effects weaving in and out here and there.

Don't be scared to change the beat up. You don't want a predictable track.

 

I’m in a learning journey, and your words are of Great value.

 

Was it really necessary to write this?
Is that some constructive feedback?

 

Okay. I apologize for my out-rightness. Autistic trait. Gets the better of me sometimes.

 

You simply forgot to let this poster more gently summarize it for you. I also liked the song, but felt the same things. I do not listen to this kind of music and maybe it's like this on purpose. Balkan? idk.

 

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