Hey everyone if you could please let me know what you think of my first song!! I have been working on this for a little while and would really appreciate all feedback good and bad!!!!! Thanks in advance.

 

Hi,

well put together song, nice fx used. Nice automation.
Only I think the snare could be a little louder.
Keep it up!

Stevie Jee

 

Nice ensemble!
I like the transitions.
The vocals are adding interest along the sections.
As a first take the sound is pretty consistent.
Cool. *yes*

 

Thanks for the replies and if you could please give me some criticism or any advice because one of the ways we get better is by listening to others advice. I will also look into the snare and see what I can do about that! Again thanks everyone