With your nice attitude you already have a good start.
The rest, hard work and inspiration, as with everyone else. Keep it

 

You can hear the problems just not always know how to improve them, well thats a classic, its irritating i know but that "inability" will decrease track after track. Doing track after track will answer more questions than any tutorial.

You have a good ear for the mix already, perseverance, ideas and the courage to show your work and take critique.
Thanks for sharing your work and keep us updated with with what you do.

 

I don't know why but while listening to both tracks there came many other songs to my mind...


1) Better off alone (Alice Deejay)

2) What's It Gonna Be (H "Two" O Feat. Platnum)

3) Boom, Boom, Boom, Boom (Vengaboys)

4) Sexy Chick/Bitch (David Guetta Feat. Akon)

5) Discolights (Ultrabeat Feat. Darren Styles)

Overall okay but i'd choose B)Funky Train V3 over the others and please make the track fast; it's too slow, better overlap just like L cut and J cut to sound good and catchy .

 

Thanks for listening... I'm certainly not going to complain about the comparisons because I consider those you have listed to be great tunes.

 

Google suggests they are to do with video editing?
Could you expand what you mean please.

 

Deleted, because was misinterpreted!

 

Last edited: May 26, 2022

Yes, "J cuts and L cuts are generally used as transitions between footage within scenes instead of traditional transition effects, like a fade or cross dissolve, because they help the viewer keep visual continuity. “It gives people a buffer — a cushion to get to the next place,” says videographer Nainoa Langer."

So overlap one vocal over other with some FX to reduce space and make your track more popular else nowadays people have Godfish attention span.

No man, but @Stuck In The 80s can use Low and High pass to make the female and male vocal more magical, be creative, use all FXs, what's the AZ for. What i found your tracks to be very amateurish and slow or i could be wrong because i do listen to those aforesaid tunes above.

We always love what we make ourselves and making mistake and learning from it is the key to success...

 

Is that what you meant? (see final version in original post)

 

i guess you are not going to last here much longer doing the same silly harassing as you always do, foster.

 

It's average but ok now