Hey guys,

New to the forum, very happy to be a part of this awesome music community. Haven't really interacted with many here, but the ones I've interacted with and know me here, they're all awesome, i hope all of you are in the best of health too. Super thanks to Olymoon always.

Here's Some work of mine I uploaded today,

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/w5Ao3

would be delighted to get honest feedbacks, if you get time pointers and directions will always help us grow

Thank you

 

Nice, found myself hitting repeat in the end!

My mixing is still in development but my personal subjective opinion is that the kick lacks a little bit of deep end as soon as the arrangement gets a bit fuller. The voices are a cool idea but they sound a bit as if they don't fit together well. Some are quieter, more distant, and stuff. I still like it though. But maybe someone else who's more into this kind of genre can give you better feedback. Keep it up!

Oh and that robotic voice on the left side is so cool! sounds great

 

Last edited: Apr 19, 2022

On my speakers at home the sound is pretty good, sounds very professional. So big praise to you great music.

From minute 2:28 the sound breaks in rather abruptly, another theme begins, the listener wonders, where have
I landed now, in short, I would reconsider this short part, whether you can not regulate it differently.

I would also rethink the end of the song. The fade out is not coherent enough.

 

You're absolutely right. I felt the same after reading and going through your pointers..
Thank you so much for the feedback, really appreciate it. I'll work around on it again. You've got great ears too... I gotta work on the flow and arrangement a lil bit, but i am glad it sounds alright to the ears and isn't really harsh. My main objective was to head into a cosmic journey, unknown territories and then in a blink of an eye the whole game changes, i hope you know what i mean, sometimes abruptness can make or break it.

 

Last edited: Apr 22, 2022

nice! I love this "Building small blocks for the universe; invisible vibrating loops of energy"

 

So glad it resonated