A track I made please give feedback

 

Hi @sholay75, your song stands out from the mass taste, a very unique theme, which unfolds its somber effect.
It's a bit monotone, maybe a video would do the song good.
You could also reinkopieren 2 breaks and fill with something else, just an idea.
Overall well done - I like it. But is expandable. Stay tuned.

 

Yes it need an intro and interludes

 

Wind or storm sounds do very well for starters (15 seconds of wind). But it's your song, so it's just an idea.

 

yes it can increase the sense of desolation