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Not bad, dude! Sounds more like a movie soundtrack than hiphop. I like it.

 

Thanks bro! Movie soundtrack? Yeah, I can get that aswell haha. It has some ambient type of vibes. It's for sure different than usual hiphop I quess haha.

 

Mute that drumloop: it is completely useless

 

I see what you did there....

Build up the tension, build it up more, a little more, just a crank more, push it a little further, no we can go it a bit more, keep pushing and then finally the release and then immediately back into tension.

The result unfortunately is the musical equivalent to a mother's labour pains before the child birth.

 

I can't hear a correct structure, it sounds pretty confused.

sometimes less is more

And pay attention to the depth graduation

https://www.izotope.com/en/learn/what-is-mix-depth-how-to-create-front-back-space.html

 

Last edited: Dec 28, 2021

far too loud and its not hip hop

 

Sounds more like Trip Hop and as mentioned before, less is more.
One of the noises in the background reminds me of a clipper (hair dressing machine).