Hello all!

Did this some while ago, first time I tried this kind of genre. Would like some input please? This was hard for me. I usually play and make metal. Thank you all!

 

Hello @pasi, thanks to you for the expressive video of our universe and the beautiful music. I like it very much.

 

@BEAT16 Thank you very much!!

 

Ah! You used the mock-up of those 2 black holes that collided in 2019! Cool! Not many know about that, it seems.
The track is great, apart from the MIDI bending on those opening guitar notes, imo.
But I'm glad I listened beyond that, because the rest was good.
Almost put me off listening though, just saying.

edit: because the bends of exactly 200 cents seemed too perfect, and reveal it's not a real guitar.
I think it revealed that when the same sample is bent up like that, the tone reveals it too.
I prefer to not know at the start of the track that I'm not listening to a real guitar.
I want to be fooled.
But that's just me.

 

Last edited: Dec 6, 2021

I liked it very much - well done.

Suggestion-(IMHO) A little vib on the sustained guitar notes in the intro will add so much.

 

There was but I did not like it Just a sustain. Thank you for your suggestion though! But hey, some like some not ;)

 

Appreciate your feedback and you are correct about those bends. And pretty basic stuff also. Thanks man!

 

I really liked the first 3 mins before the build up.

To me the 'real instruments' kind of take away from the some of the sutler aspects of the synth sounds tails. That's me though. It might just be sound selection but the piano and the guitar cover up more than they add and give a mid 80s mandatory {insert guitar part here} feel. This is personal taste and it doesn't detract from the work.

The texture of the first 3 mins kind of gets lots in all the pomp and standard fare of the ending, so it kind of lost some of it's loftiness for me.

It's a great sounding peace, thank you for sharing it with everyone.

 

Thank you very much for listening and comments. As I said first one for me this kind of music. Really appreciate all inputs and suggestions!

 

I really liked it, kind of reminded me of Halo but only because of the space pads and electric guitars doused in reverb. Not the arrangement.

It's a great practice to break off and try new things otherwise you will pigeon hole yourself into one narrow tree hole. It will only make you realize you can do more with metal in the end, imo.

 

@pasi Great track mate. Thanks to you, I was in space for sometime.. the video on full screen with the music was just soo awesomee.. keep them coming!

 

1st of all: Nice track, beautiful melodies and a perfect combination of sound and visuals. Well done. If i were the one to finish it, i would give the drums just slight more punch and presence, maybe add some kind of variations or buildup on drums. Plus, that guitar in the intro is a bit too clean to be a real one in terms of accuracy on the beat as mentioned earlier by someone else. But that is "critisism" on a high level.