http://soundcloud.com/grada/slinky-original-mix-sc-edit

Any feedback or opinions are welcome ;)

 

hmmm...that kick doesn't suit very well for that kind of production...sounds a little too thin and rubbery, you need to use a kick with a matching texture, or you need to use elements in your track that mix well with the kick...

The percussion feels like there is waay to much high end, especially with those hi hats, but at the same time it needs to stand out a little more...

I think you kinda overkilled it with the sidechaining, mainly due to the percussion having too much high end...

But the writing is great, I like the bassline as well, v. nice. It is a standard tech house production, just needs more of a unique technique and better engineering...

Great effort however *yes*

 

hkp
Thanks so much on feedback, hmm kick sounds ok here on my adam a5x without woofer(they are generally lacking of subs) but these days I will check it on big sound system in the club. Which sound system u have?

Yeah i do some kickass sidechain maybe I push it too much will fix it in final version. Maybe will add some melodic line to make mix more interesting.

;)