Just finished my new song and really don’t know how good or bad I am doing.
Your opinion is appreciated.

 

Congratulations @Alfgw on your new song. The song reflects the world in upheaval - at the moment it's really a bit chaotic.

 

Really?
To my ears, this is original AF!
Some great mix techniques and automation here.
Enjoyable listen, thanks.

 

Thank you to take your time and give an opinion.

Regards.
Alf.

 

You've kept the level of intensity throughout without it ever getting dull. Hard to do. Well done!

 

Love the way you mangled that classical line.
This style isn't my thing but you got the ear worm working on me... I'm still humming the hook..
so wow nice one

 

I thought it was very unique which is a good thing and listened all the way through. Would've loved to hear some vocoder vocals in there like 'Rock your body" or any words maybe better choice than mine or any vocals, also some parts reminded me of the beautiful music from India in parts which I love too.
Thanks for sharing

 

I really apreciate all your comments.
Thanks.

Alf.

 

It lacks bass, I'm on Yamaha Hs8 here.

 

I thought the movement throughout the track was clever.
The overall production was too lo-fi for me to want to play it again though.

 

The Good: Great groove, great originality, superb energy, nice synth choices. Stereo imaging is working nice!
The Bad: As mentioned above, some bass is lacking. Need more of it and it's gotta work with the kick - in this kind of music, maybe sidechaining the bass to get out of the way of the kick (or placing the bass line - esp. if it's percussive, slightly ahead or behind the kick using a randomizer for the midi track) would be a good plan. The - how do I say this, the 'GwwAAAhw' synth effect starts to wear on me after about 2 minutes. Maybe playing with the filters throughout the piece would keep the line even more interesting than it is at present? Or maybe switching out to a different synth tone/sound altogether and reprising the 'GwwAAhw' at the back end.
Keep on musicing!

 

Creative. You could easily find this appropriate for any number of major trailers on youtube

 

I like it, in fact I nearly play all your song at soundcloud. I do like this one, somehow it's remain me of Unreal Super Hero 3 by Kenet & Rez

 

grreat trrack. makes me want to belly dance!