Just finished my new song and really don’t know how good or bad I am doing.
Your opinion is appreciated.

 

Last edited: Jul 21, 2021

It's not often that I can listen to this kind of track from start to finish, so having me do so is an achievement in itself (lol)
I like the aggressive synth sound that, together with the sequencer, drives the song. On the other hand, it is there all the time with little additions to it. I believe they refer to this as ear candy which is therefore lacking in your track.
The build-up (2/3 of the song) is not very powerful but that might be intentional.
I like the syncopated rhythm on some parts of the song although I might want it maybe only underneath the vocals. So more restrained to a specific part of the song. As far as the vocals: I find the melody a little weak. And for some reason, the vocal part doesn't feel like the chorus of the song, which would be more logical to me.

And there you have them: my 2 cents.......

 

Thank you very much,I really appreciate your words,

 

I'm also not into Electronic music, so take it with a pinch of salt but..

I think there's many elements in the Center that compete for protagonism..

While also not making/letting the Chords/Harmonic accompaniment be Present enough..

Maybe try to create some space by using/panning drums and other elements differently,
(Bass and BD are good in the Center, but you can be more free with Snare Cymbals/Hat Toms and other percs..)

And surely try to put more substance into the Chords/Harmonic accompaniment..
(and make them sound more on the Left and/or Right, not in the Center..)

a Bird with beak and feet is a bird, but without Wings it won't fly too long!

However I like the overall happy Creative mood of the track,
and the solo/melodic parts with that morphing-like synth lead sounds.. it's enjoyable in creative/artistic terms

It just needs better balance of the elements,
and with practice it will get better, but I'd say you're on the right path..

 

Last edited: Jul 21, 2021

Yes, the same problems I had in other songs i did, I'm repeating the same mistake, I think I try to make it full and end it loosing a center of attention.

Thank you very much.

 

Use visual meters that show if you've collapsed down to mono or how much you spread to stereo.