EDIT - have removed it temporarily as I make some changes... will re-upload later... meanwhile, thanks a ton to all of you!

Hello Dear Friends!

It’s been a while since I posted something here. Listened to some of the new music posted here… really awesome work!

I’m trying to do some modern sounding synth pop and have made this. As usual, I’m singing (this time in a strange nasal falsetto style)... the mix is still Work In Progress.

Any criticism/ feedback would be extremely helpful.

Thank you!!!

 

Last edited: May 7, 2021

That's a nice retro mood based on synth-pop songs! Congrats for this one, 'cos I really enjoyed listening your track!

 

Actually not bad. With a different production style and vocals you could sell this for some nice money.

 

@Mynock ... Thanks very much... happy to hear you enjoyed it... Only thing being, i was shooting for a modern vibe... But landed in retroland...

@hackerz4life ... Thank you... Do you think you could share some reference of the kind or production/ singing style you'd like to hear?

Regards

 

I think you need to dial back on the weird vocal fx (vocoder arps?) and cut out the Peter Pan porcupine party pickled pepper references. It's quite "all high octaves all the time", production wise; you could have the vocal down in normal, human singing range an 8ve below? Otherwise fine. Sounds very Shinechilla to the max, a bit?

 

@famouslut ... thanks for the listen and the suggestions!

@KungPaoFist ... thanks for the listen!