Thanks for listening and a special thanks to any input and constructive comments.

 

Below is all my opinion and not the truth
The drum rhythm that comes in after the intro clashes with the little pattern that is repeating itself from the beginning (starts around 0 min 30 sec).
The drums themself sound a bit weak and "sloppy" and are to loud(?) in the mix.
The song lasts about 6 minutes but you lost me after 3. There is no break (except a break in the drums) from the monotonous sound that keeps going on. I'm more a guy of a traditional song-structure so what I'm missing is a "middle 8" (as it is called) that's different from verse and chorus.
Those 2 are also hard to distinguish in your song.
I've got no knowledge of production but on my laptop the "darker" sounds all blend together (on purpose?) so they become a bit messy.

To end it positively:
What I like though is the vibe. Could be the soundtrack to a movie scene.
Hope it helps.
Gr. Eddty

 

I am really digging this track. I don't tend to have that critical ear to comment on mixing and stuff, but will just say I really like it. This needs a bump, and some more listens! Earned a follower.

 

This song is dope. If I was gay I would put this song in my butthole

 

Not a fan of the kick drum. Too thumpy, too loud, distracting from everything else.

 

^ Hello @T3NR@ ,excellent production & amazing vibes on this track ,thank you so much for sharing .
Since you're asking for feedback :
1.First of all, i would say you have an amazing track on your hands, but the break drum pattern,does not work extremely well imho
2.You could exclude/mute the drums altogether & have a Magical chill out /cinematic track right there
3. You could increase the tempo (120-130 bpm) & introduce a four on the floor drum pattern,instead of the broken beats/breaks,making this
a wonderful track in the melodic techno / deep progressive territory
Once again amazing vibes on this track, have a great day !