My Track - Deep House, add comments for help

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by CSider, Oct 10, 2013.

  1. CSider

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    hi guys,

    please check out my tune and comment any changes etc.

    http://soundcloud.com/c-sider/csider-pornographic-reworked
     
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  3. swing

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    Hi. I´m not an expert in EDM so I´m going to focus in the mix.
    I think you have some blurred instruments here. The dirty synths should be more cutting and standing out.
    Take a listen to the reverbs. Maybe you could apply some EQing to the reverbs to make some extra space for the instruments so the overall sound could be more clear.

    Greetings.
     
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  4. tek909

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    I think you need to eq your sounds more also. It will really help your sounds that seem to be fighting with other sounds and give them their own place in the mix.. I personally don't care for the vocal part, but that's just me.
     
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