Promise I'll be good to you

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  1. Paul MCCAN

    Paul MCCAN Member

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    Hi,

    My new track. All positive critics are welcome :) :like:



    gr,
    Paul
     
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  3. MassesAreAsses

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    Took way too long to get to the lyrics?
     
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  4. audiozuser76

    audiozuser76 Producer

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    "Promise I'll be good to you"... Can I trust you?:rofl:
    Nice Sound! Let's continue it!
     
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  5. Stuck In The 80s

    Stuck In The 80s Rock Star

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    pleasant enough tune. Reminded me a little of the The Farm. Could do with being 2 minutes shorter. It's not a dance track so doesn't need to follow the structure of one.
     
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  6. marveljam

    marveljam Ultrasonic

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    You label the track on Soundcloud as Melodic progressive house. I think you might want to consider writing electronic pop. It is a good start. I agree with the posters so far. This is not a dance tune. Condense it. Also, watch the high wispy wash of effects. They might need to get tucked in. In addition, your vocals need to be lifted or make space. I also would like to hear more from the lyrics. With a little more crafting, I think you have a good thing :)
     
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  7. No Avenger

    No Avenger Audiosexual

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    Smart move. :winker:

    Sounds good.
     
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  8. Paul MCCAN

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    Yeah, I understand your comment. Was also a bit strugeling with it to put it somewhere..
    Or I keep it out.. is also n option :wink:

    Thanks, will for sure continue :). And yes, U can trust me :yes:

    Thanks U. I tried to do my best :)

    Great, thanks for the feedback. Will take a re-look @ it :like:. I did the mixing on my headphones, so a bit difficult to hear the balance.

    Thanks man

    Thanks @ all for responding.
    I appreciate it
     
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  9. Paul MCCAN

    Paul MCCAN Member

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    Vocal is now more clear.
    I removed the special effect
     
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  10. recycle

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    Cheeeesyyyisssimo!!
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  11. BuntyMcCunty

    BuntyMcCunty Rock Star

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    Carl Hunter, the Farm's bass player lives one street over from me. I bump into him in the supermarket all the time.
     
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