Hello my name is Alf, I made this song after 2 years trying to Learn music.

I hope you like it.

 

sounds like italo disco and bigroom house had a baby
it sounds kind of experimental, but not in a good way, wouldn't dance to it

 

If you are a new producer then good job but you need to improve more.

 

Thanks for your feedback.
I needed it

 

Again if you're new and learning it's a good start.
But it's all the same energy all the way through. The only change is that you take the kick drum out at some point. Maybe you need some better monitors too as some of those high synths were making my ears hurt.

 

I think it sounds good for a first track! Don't feel discouraged.
Building on what Stuck in the 80s said, you can make this track a lot better by giving and taking energy away from it at certain points. Check out a course on arrangement and structure for that. Good luck!

 

I remember when it was my first time ever making music, I put delay's and reverbs to max on every channel. It was hilarious but fun

 

Thank you very much.
This other song was mixed with different earphones

 

These two plugins have helped me a lot. Voxengo Span and Metric AB. They might help you as well.

 

I like it... Very retro 90's...

 

Thanks, this second song was produced with different earphones that let me hear better the low and top end.

 

Great sounds, but you need to work on the mix a little more.

 

Many thanks.

 

the energy is there it just needs more variation. good luck

 

Thanks, I will take your advice.

 

I think the question of dancing or not depends on what sort of drugs.