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Im done with this so while feedback is appreciated, Im not going back to this track.

I dont know what to think of the lead synth line, but without it, the section in question seems very empty.

Is the bass too loud? Drums?

Cheers

 

Hey Paus, I really dig the vibe on this. Like all the synth sounds and how they're mixed.
Somewhere around 0,45 and 2,10 I would have liked to hear some melody/solo stuff, kinda like the great stuff you have on All That Glitters around 1,20 and 3,20 (just a bit softer). And I would probly have used a kick that was not so prominent, a bit more tight and 'clippy', but that's just personal taste I guess.

 

Cheers mate. Yeah I was back and forth about the synth in question. Its a bit OTT for the style, but the section felt very empty without it. Its a space filler basically

Perhaps the kick is too upfront but I wanted some punch, was tryna blend old and new.

That synth lead is pissing me off now....

Thanks for the feedback!

 

Not my M.O. to bump my stuff but Ive two reasons:
Firstly I replied to a ton of peoples threads here AFTER making my thread, effectively knocking it down the list. Bit stupid
Secondly Im gonna be taking this track down soon because its a sore thumb in relation to the rest of my stuff. So listen/download/criticise while you can.

Thanks