Hello,

both project are in early state.

The cover is mainly only the hookline. No Bass and fundamental Beat so far, but i like it..

http://soundcloud.com/otto-auch/radiohead-street-spirit

Hope it sounds somewhere between kind of recognizable but also fresh.

And the other project is only some simple chord progression - also only 3 voices *no*
I feel aonther chord after the Aminor chord (after the intro) would be more interesting but havn't found it yet..
Also this my first attempt to bring kind of dissonance into the sound.

http://soundcloud.com/otto-auch/august

Construtive critic is welcome.

Greets,
Otto

 

The Radiohead cover sounds ok, not trying to hurt your spirits, but it can be way better.


The other jam sounds good, but thats because almost anything with epic sounding strings in a minor key is going to sound good.



Overall, keep doing what you're doing and keep developing your craft, mate.

 

Thanks for your critic, it hasn't to be that positive I think most / more important is construtive critic - so feel free to name the negative things in this tunes.

About the Radiohead cover, sure you are right, I guess I'll expand it but also hoping to find a singer, because a instrumental cover of a vocal track doesn't make that much sense.

Jam sound, yes it's in minor - so you have good trained ears!?

Any ideas to "expand" this tune?

Thanks I will do that.


Greets,
Otto