hi

here my new remix

http://soundcloud.com/zcard/naughty-boy-feat-sam-smith-la

 

is it so bad that much not even one word feedback

 

the vocals at the start are out and other places, also the tune goes nowhere.

needs more in my opinion.

hope this helps

 

hi!


sorry, i try to give feedback when i can, i just have to spend my limited time online judiciously

but i agree, we have TONS of people that visit this site as guests everyday, and thousands of people visit AudioZ each day

it would be cool if more took the time to support our fellow Audiosexxors.. just by giving a listen and some constructive criticism!

we all are artists and we have an inherent need for vindication and (hopefully) appreciation of what we have created




so about your track:

for me, its always hard to rate a remix when i have no reference as to what the original track even sounded like, so i dont know just how you have affected the song, have you added sounds? removed sounds? rearranged the song?

i just cant tell with what you have given us, i recommend you include a soundcloud link or youtube link to the original track if you post a remix so we can judge your skills better

make sense?

i like the middle eastern feel of the song.. it seems it would benefit from a more varied panning and stereo separation approach

the track would benefit from a sidechained or gated kick/bass interaction, not to produce eletro style "pumping" but simply to reduce frequency overlap

i can tell you have worked on the vocals separated at about maybe 150%? so they are placed ok (but the reverb could use some mid/side tweaks to make them stand out a bit) the deepest bass should be in the dead center and set to mono in my opinion, and the kick can just barely seperate and have some more reverb/delay to make it pop- but all the other sounds in my opinion would sound better panned more around, it will really oopen up the track im sure

every now and then a synth sound is panned effectivly to the left a bit, and it really stands out, so you can tell the other elements would benefit form being adjusted sonically..

also the track seems a bit muddy in the middle freq's, make sure to subtractivly eq your unneeded freq's away if they are not needed

hope this helps man

cheers