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  1. Kinghtsurfer

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    Hello dear friends!

    I tried some music I don't usually do. Any critiques good or bad are welcome.

    Also what genre would you classify it in?



    Thank you!
     
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  3. Recoil

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    For me, it's like chillout music, everything sounds very nice :bow:
     
  4. droplet

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    nice track you could cover it in other languages...
     
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    nice one,

    imho, id say you have one proper track "flirting" with something else. those "one, two, three, four" countdowns don't really fit, they are too recurrent. a couple could be used but leading to a drop and the track doesn't contain any really, at least not a edm type of drop. i would remove/or replace them. then I think you have a really nice composition, strong and simple.

    now, if you want to make it more "edm/dance", then you would need to breakdown/thin out the track a bit before a "one two three" so that the countdown leads back to a segment of high energy/chorus/full track, as it is now the track strolls on quite steadily.
     
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    I danced to it so I'll call it Musc To Dance To as a genre. I flapped my arms like a big bird taking flight as my legs danced a jig.

    Of course it's much too short so you might need to lengthen it.
     
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    need to ad 5 6 7 8 to it
     
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    and then a 9 10 11 12
     
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    :crazy: i think you could sells this for a tv advertise. good works!:metal:
     
  11. Kinghtsurfer

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    Thanks everyone!!!

    @EddieXx ... thanks for your suggestions... I wasn't really going for an EDM banger... more like a bouncy aggressive background track for a fast paced action/ sports edit job. Thanks for taking the time to listen and suggest alternate musical directions. :like:

    @Lois Lane ... so happy you found it dancy! :) you crack me up man... flap my arms like a bird... hahahahaha! The length is short as this was created for a specific pitch. Thanks very much for your kind words... much appreciated.

    @studio5599 and @breadd ... you guys are definitely going to win next year's Nobel prize for mathematics. You better agree on how you're gonna split the prize money. :bleh:

    @Bermuda Triangle ... thanks very much... In fact, that was the reason why I made this... am glad you think its appropriate. :yes:

    Lots of Luv to all you lovelies...
     
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    Great track man i love it
     
  13. Kinghtsurfer

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    any chinese singers here?
     
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    We're all Chinese singers here. Maybe you should ask who's not.
     
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    For a first attempt making a new genre this is impressive, it have the vibes of dnb but slower bpm, I'd classify it as a dance.
    I'm loving the GAT synth in the background, makes me wanna listen to some old goodie trance music
     
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    @elias2tife ... Thanks a lot for listening and the comment. :)
     
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    Thanks to @oneunder, @SpyFx ✪, @Xupito for the thumbs up.

    Thanks also to the person who was kind enough to tell me this song is trash on Soundcloud... :hahaha:
     
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