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  1. droplet

    droplet Rock Star

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    comments and suggestions greatly appreciated.
    thx
     
  2. moskar3

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    Ciao...mi piace anche troppo corto il pezzo.. avrei aggiunto una voce..e poi mi ha fatto pensare alla mia musica
     
  3. droplet

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    thanks. I wish I had a voice... (other than my own...)
     
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    hai qualcosa da sentire?
     
  5. moskar3

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    io uso bank voices o allora una voce amica o una voce presa sul vivo come qua >>
     
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    hi,
    heres one I did yesterday:

     
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    Yo @droplet ... This one is pretty cool... Sounds like an abstract ambient track... Like a background score to a dystopian scene... :like:
     
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    we live in dystopia. so I guess for me it's normal.

    Thanks a lot for your encouragement.
     
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    maybe you confused my track with Maskar3's track?
    his stuff is very nice, if you haven't listened to him check him out.
     
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    Nice work! I wish I could be at your level.. While I learned music for about a year from a traditional pro, who toured with his band in the 70's and got famous & successful, I unfortunately had to turn my career into doing visual creative arts.
    So you are getting a LISTENERs feedback.
    I mainly use music to "paint music", while listening to it. In the middle-ages it was customary for music teachers that they also taught painting. Both creative arts use the same brain areas.
    So your track is okay for a background / ambient / support: imagine your musician friend walking into your studio and hears your track. While your track is playing he/she immediately sits down to the synthesizer and begins playing a melody selecting a really nice patch. So you need a key/lead synth sound to create a melody here. This track resembles those automated workstations, like what a Yamaha Tyros gives you. On that one you can start a rumba or salsa basic track and you have to join in on the keyboard to play a melody.

    Unfortunately, melodies are the hardest to create in music, as a pleasant melody it has to tell a story:
    Junkie XL uses this same method, but his melodies are near-junk, only good for background tracks, but he creates amazing tutorials and hardware demo videos. So here is an excellent one:
    https://www.masterclass.com/classes/hans-zimmer-teaches-film-scoring
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    Demonstrated real-time, by a pro, jumping right into what matters, what I wanted to convey:
     
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    thanks a lot for you comments and your time.

    It took me about 5 hours to get the track where it is...too soon really to post it, but I thought I'd take the chance as all my stuff are works in progress.
    If you want just keep working on your music and studying. it's a natural process. thanks to your and the others comments I'm lucky enough to get your ideas on how to improve.
     
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    Great one the only thing i can say is make the snare sit better in the mix. to me it sounds isolated i don't know why, mabe add a bit of reverb ?
    and cut that base a bit short right at the end
    other than those little things it is all good
    best of luck
     
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    Thanks al lot I keep your suggestions in mind for the next one!
     
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