wonderful

 

But not as wonderful as your triangle.

 

good melodies!! i dont like the pads.. (sound too much like cheap keyboard) .. any way gave me a sweet sensation

 

Good Effort
if you don't mind my advice, it sounds too safe and stuck in the 80's . maybe you should try to spice it up add some noises or some weird percussion etc
of course that's just my opinion. best of luck

 

I like it good job

 

Yes, I agree. TBH, these works are not real works. They are just some homework, my mom gives and I'm obliged to finish them before I can get out of my room.

 

Yup, you really need to get control of your pads 'weight' and imho try to take a more imaginative approach on your arrangements generally - all the same, it kinda reminds me of ABBA's 'Like An Angel Passing Through My Room'...

So, with better structuring/arrangements & some sweet female vocal collaborator(s), Eurovision 2021 could be yours - i'm sure you'll look memorably eyecatching all goosed-up in tight leather shorts with your organ out there for all to see...

 

^ Nice one Foster ,i could hear this in Stranger Things-Season 4,in a scene or in a transition between scenes
Thank you for sharing ,leave your Mother out of this & focus more on your music instead of your silly thoughts ! Have a great day !

 

your mom wont let you play with Trianagles

 

I agree with the positive feedback you got from @SpyFX
but I would just add...
Your Avatar explains why your song title is complaining about 'No Hard Feelings'.
That limp left wrist action is never going to produce 'Hard Feelings' is it?
If it's 'Hard Feelings' you want - try both hands and a more vigorous action.
You'll get the hang of it eventually. Make sure your mom's not around!

 

Thanks for everything.

 

We are the world!

Nice tune!

 

Thanks! But my tune era is almost over and I'm planning on doing more serious things. Very serious ... or maybe not.