ehy guys, this is a demo, one of my new project, first job .. im not "expert" of this kind..
I hope you will like, criticisms are welcome, listen\enjoy ;)

http://soundcloud.com/basalto-music/everything-demo-edit

 

Nice, enjoyable track.........light & lively!

 

Thanks popeye

 

it´s a demo i know, so i gonna throw some constructive critics,
from 0:31 to 1.01 you should organise better the drums
the guitar from 2:53-3:24 sounds a little bit out of tune,
you should bring up the volume of the bass and the piano,
at 1:24 to 1:47 when the violin starts you should add strings melody to fill that part,
and add more reverb to the violin
dont take me wrong
just my opinion anyway.

 

Thanks Me2audio!
gladly accept what you're saying, and I take it as an improvement ..
percussion voluntarily are very simple, and guitar was my desire, not so much out of tune,
but make it sound vintage, and slightly "disturbed"! probably, crusher, flanger etc. .. make it a little out of tune!

regards;)

 

I like it from 1:50 but my advice is, you must add something more to make tension (drop, crash, white noise, more FX), also introduce sounds (instruments) they come out of nowhere, add some little break here and there Track is catchy so it will be good after all

 

cool man, if you like the guitar dont change it, it´s just my opinion,
when i read minimal pop, because pop is always very tunned, i mean everything is tunned to the cent, that´s why i made that remark, because it pops out a bit.
but you have a good demo to work on and to progress, keep it up
well done

 

How i miss lyrics\vocals in songs.

 

thanks urOk for advice ;)

the vocal is a test, comes from the package Iconian Loopmasters