My 2nd Track since returning from a 10 year break from making music and in my opinion the most complete since I returned, All the vocals are taking from Moff in Human Traffic (played by Danny Dyer)

I Welcome and love all feedback!

 

Hey, sounds like a fun track to me with all those voice samples, fantastic
Just my honnest opinion, for what's worth...
Maybe shorten the complete track, for me it takes a bit too long.
I really like the piano starting part arround @ 0:26, it gives a good vibe.
From 1:13, it may have some more energy.. maybe some lead melody!?
Personaly I do not like the bongo's (I think) or maybe a bit lower in volume.
But hey, that's just my opinion. Do not attach too much value to it

 

Really nice feedback Paul! Apperciate It always! I made a longer version so a friend of mine can remix it and play about with it somewhat.

The bongo's were a last minute addition to add some variety to the drums and percussion.

Appreciate the follow as well!