FIrst track uploaded in almost 3 years lol

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by royalcolours, Jul 12, 2013.

  1. royalcolours

    royalcolours Newbie

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    https://soundcloud.com/b_yen/clipping

    couldnt get the widget to work :dunno:

    would love to hear some real feedback, all is appreciated... sincerely :mates:
     
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  3. Me2audio

    Me2audio Member

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    just remove the "s" from https:// = http://

    B. Yen
    Clipping

    http://soundcloud.com/b_yen/clipping
     
  4. fuad

    fuad Producer

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    Quite an intriguing track i must say. Cool breakdown at 1:11...I think it could use some mysterious whispering type effects throughout the song, kind of like ghost whispering or something like that, that might sound cool. A good rap verse on this track would also take it to another level. Use some mastering compression to get the song to pump a little bit as well because at the moment I kind of feel like each element is just doing it's own thing, a little compression can bring the energy up and bring them together and give the track some more punch
     
  5. royalcolours

    royalcolours Newbie

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    i knew i needed some other kind of fx in there! i will definately some more compression in my master buss. mixing the sub and kick was a bitch but super fun when it came out clean! (in my ears). thanks for the feedback fuad, really appreciate it
     
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