Hello friends, how are you? ....
I want to introduce my self and share my work...

This is the first song I have finished on my side/solo project ...
Why do I call Track #5, because this song is the fifth song out of a total of five songs that I will work on ...
I want to finish the fifth song first ...

I would like to say thank you to master @No Avenger for all his help during this time giving a lot of very super advice ... I am very helped ...
Thank you master ...

Anyway....
I divided it into 3 versions ... -5.2 LUFSi, -8 LUFSi, -14 LUFSi ...
Maybe later I will use it depending on my tastes and needs ... All use 16 Bit 44100 Hz ...

-5.2 LUFSi Version

Spoiler: Loudness

Spoiler: Track #5 (-5.2 LUFSi)

-5.2 LUFSi Instrumental Version

Spoiler: Track #5 Minus One (-5.2 LUFSi)

-8 LUFSi Version

Spoiler: Loudness

Spoiler: Track #5 (-8 LUFSi)

-14 LUFSi Version

Spoiler: Loudness

Spoiler: Track #5 (-14 LUFSi)

This is my first time producing a genre song like this ... I don't know for sure what kind of genre this is, that I know I gave what was in my head all this time ...

I recorded and made all the instruments at home ... Vocal Tracks were recorded by my partner as usual ....
I mixing and finished/mastering this song by my self too ...

What do you think of this song?
Constructive criticism and suggestions are very welcome ...
Thank you for your time and attention ...



Have a good day to you....
Cheers

 

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Musically is rich and I like it, it has some sort of electronic rock vibe, the sound is there in a proper place. Maybe the acc distortion gts could had more low mids; and let them play with a kick with more thump 80-100hz, snap 2-4khz and less rumble (cut 50hz). But that could be a matter of taste and I like the track per se, with maybe cutting the rumble a little unless you have checked it on a bigger system and it moves the song in a good way.
At 4:47 the girl voice overlaps with the chorus of the male vocalist and that kinda lost me there, but everything can be worked out.

Cheers and congrats on your project!!

 

keep up the good work!

 

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xupito

 

Alright, I see ...
Maybe as soon as I return to open this project again, I will try your suggestions ...
Thank you for your advice and compliment ... I will try on Track #4 next time ...

Cheers and thanks again Herr Tony ...

Thank you very much Lager ...

Hello Gyro...

 

Love it! I'm a metal lover so no surprise. It needs some polishing and to glue better some parts like the vocals, but considering the complexity of the task it's only natural.

Although the the most shocking part is...

That fluffy old fartiger @No Avenger actually can mix!!
(just in case I'm just joking... probably)

Here I am.
Enjoying truly good genres like metal, speed metal, death metal, industrial electronic rap metal or just orchestral melodic instrumental gothic metal. Sometimes even hard rock when I feel romantic...
You knew it was gonna happen, well done

 

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I see, thank you for the advice and review ... Maybe someday I will learn from you too ...
The question is, what's wrong with you and @No Avenger ? Kind of soulmate ehh??

 

I'd love to but when it comes to produce music I'm a beginner. I can't mix

He's really good at playful jokes so we get along. He can mix and I hate him for that (only a bit)

 

Konnichiwa, WIMA.

Thank you very much for the nice compliments, you're too kind.

Please keep in mind that the louder versions will be lowered considerably on several platforms, if not to say on almost all of them.

I'd call it Hefty Metal.

Looking forward to #1 - 4.

 

Only with him, not with me.

 

Baaka

 

I see .... But thanks again for your time here ...
But maybe someday you can teach me how to make a joke with @No Avenger ?
@No Avenger , maybe you two should collaborate?

Konnichiwa, @No Avenger .
You are welcome.... I am helped by you a lot ...

Should I use the -8 LUFSi for Spotify?
Because some cases the difference of loudness on Spotify to hugh between tracks/songs .... Not close like -14 LUSFi to -12 LUSFi ... But like jumping and shocked you on ear when try to compare ...
I'm afraid my track will be drowned between other tracks ....

I think my song is too light to be called Hefty Metal ...
Friend of my vocalist called this track a Cute Metal Hardcore .... unbelieveable ....

I can't wait to finish the remaining 4 songs ...

Is that true @Xupito ?

 

Sure. We're already doing it in this thread and all over this forum. Noa and I are in fact top-class when collaborating in jokes
Oh, perhaps you meant music, not joking...

 

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Yeah, it's a pretty decent mix! Sounds very interesting, like a mixture of elements present in the vast J-Rock genre brushed with a few pinches of Devin Townsend! The rhythmic bases on the guitars are very well done and executed. And the melodies are cool too. Congrats, looking forward to checking out what's next.

 

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This:

Been a long time since I listened to Spotify, therefore I'm not sure what causes this. Maybe ask in a separate thread?

 

Why not collaboration in music?? I think you two have a chemistry ...

Thank you for your review ...
Your review is very interesting too ...
I don't think anyone will notice that I also use J-Rock style for this song, but I wrong and get busted by you hahahaha ...

 

I'm really a beginner, so there's not stuff to work with. But when I do some track @No Avenger is going to be busier than Trump's public relations advisor. At the end of the day that's what friends are for, to take advantage of them.
Well, that sounded bad. Friends are also for stealing their girlfriends...

There're some cool rock-metal Japanese bands. Guys, check out the intro part of this anime OP OST theme. Nice riff and vocals.

 

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Busted !!!



About the "first time producing a genre song like this", we apprehend reality through selection. We can only pick up small pieces of the reality that surrounds us and it is precisely because you use musical genres and their respective styles combined with a personalized treatment that makes the experience so profitable.

Another thing that I really found interesting was the customization of your mix. See, this is the problem of saying, try to add a little more compression on the guitars and try to cut some middle freq there to sound like etcetera. There is a personality in the tone and color resulting from your work and this also makes the experience interesting as well.
Again, a great satisfaction to be able to check your track. Feep up the good work!

 

Rock and metal are these kind of genres that you just don't care about everything. Just ignore everything and go crazy. Nice genres to exhale all your frustrations and make you feel alive. Making a rock song is also on my bucket list.

In my opinion it sounds good. Very aggressive. Nice drums. I love that section at 2:48. It's crazy what some people can do with their voices.