New song

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  1. nivi

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    Hello guys,

    just finished a new song, if you have a little time, you can listen. Thank you.



    If you leave a feedbeck, thank you twice :)

    NV
     
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  3. mrpsanter

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    Very well done, I like it very much.
    You know your stuff and it shows.
    May I ask what did you use?
     
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    Man i love it so emotional so well produced.CONGRATS!!
     
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  5. nivi

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    Thank you very much!

    I used:
    Omnisphere Keyscape piano
    NI Guitars
    synth from Rapid
    and voice from ZeroG Ethera
    Cubase 10 ;)
     
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  7. nivi

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    No worries, I'm horrible at composing. :winker:
     
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  9. Xupito

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    Wow, Sounds lovely man.

    Good advises from the other fellas about the technical mixing. Even @No Avenger was useful for once, big shock...:rofl:

    It's easier to improve at mixing/mastering than at composing man, keep it up :wink:

    Oh, I forgot:
    Thanks is good. Beers is better
    :rofl:
     
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    I'd like to say that I love this song.... I almost do!
    I think the verses are masterfully produced and the ambience is pretty serene with a lovely melody, but the chorus "Take me home" just takes that lovely relaxed feeling away.
    To my ears (and this is only a view point from my ears perspective) The chorus is way too compressed and pretty ear fatiguing!
    I can almost feel the pressure build up in my ear canals and it's just too much.
    Personally, I would lower the compression ratios at the choruses.
    I'm a 52 yr old guy who's ears have heard better days so what do I know?
    Good song but needs a wee bit more care with overall production. :bow:
     
  11. nivi

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    Thank you :)
    As soon as you are in Czech Republic (Brno city), you will get your beer ! and do not forget, czech beer is the best :wink:
     
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    You are absolutely right, I know about it, but I was not able to make the vocals sound right. Thank you for your advices...I try to do it so. THX !
     
  13. mrpsanter

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    I listened to this song at least five times since yesterday:

    Despite all the stuff with compression and so on,, I believe that your song has the potential to be a hit and I wouldn't be too surprised if we were listening it on radio this summer.
     
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    Hello,
    nice song it's got all the elements but to my ears (might be my monitors Rokit 5) too much reverb and crackle take it down a bit and make the voice more prominent
    just my two cents.
    good luck :wink:
     
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    DobrĂ½ den
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    this is movie and series material...not mainstream ugly radio...
     
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  16. nivi

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    wow guys...you are so nice to me !! THANK YOU all
     
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    Buying tickets as we speak, you don't mess with a beer treat... :rofl:
     
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