Would appreciate some feedback on my latest track! (Dance/Pop)

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  1. StolenShine

    StolenShine Kapellmeister

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  3. Thankful

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    Nice enough track. Does it make me move? No. Why? The singer has no passion or energy in making the thing really special.
     
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    A professional made production :like:, not your first one, I assume.
    But I must agree, the singer lacks a bit character.
     
  5. EddieXx

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    really nice.

    the intro sounded a tiny bit demo-like for what then came in shape of a proper full blown pop track in the chorus.

    if anything, eq the nasal freq a tiny bit out of the intros vocal (and rest off the track?) and then maybe push the level of the intro/verses a tiny bit more so they are closer in level to the chorus. I get you want the drop to hit but now there is just a bit too much difference.

    regarding the song, its a matter of taste really, i find it totally decent. its the style of the song really, sung in a different way it would loose the character that is supposed to be a bit laconic and then surprise you with the high energy drop, you can't keep chasing your tail. track is done!

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