Hi, you have ideas, it made me think of FSOL a little. Unfortunately it sounds like a low bitrate MP3. It lacks some Highs (above 10KHz)and dynamic is missing. IMO, you should remix the tune, not only remaster. EQ each instrument so they sit right (in terms of volume and timbre). Take a special care with the low-mid band (approx. 120-400Hz) because that's where the sounds mask each other the most. Keep working and you should easily get a much better sound. Cheers!
Hi, thanks for your (gently) feedback. Hope you mean the 90s FSOL *yes* - FSOL is cool. What lets you think of FSOL? The sound? I'll take a closer to this frequence range and to the single elements. Any (pure) musical critic or ideas? Cheers Jack
The beginning might remind FSOL... During the development it contains other elements much more glassy and sparky although at the end bang FSOL kinda of bass appear again… I like the motion you are achieving, how you draw the attention from one element to another, how you place harmony in the middle of there. The sound is good at least for me, just needing a little dash of darkness or jazzy wildness …
