so i think i should also go with the flow and jump to the party with my fellow audioz pirates & producers.

cheers.

edit :- i don't have spire installed and i am missing out true pianos also at the moment. but will fix it in the next version i guess. so this is not the final rendered version.

 

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That's ok, but why is the whole track mono?

 

Nice track, thanks for sharing it with us. As @No Avenger said: Why is the whole track mono? Another thing, at 1:14 please either lower that sound or better yet remove it from the song. Does not even sound to be in the correct key. It has no business in there.

 

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yeah i am working on a fill that should fit instead of it. and yes will do it in stereo my bad. i left settings on mono.

 

ok so i checked and i mistaken you for the 2nd fill at 1:41. that is the filter that is making it sound weird.

https://pasteboard.co/IvftPGD.png

 

hmmm so this track is progressive trance or something else around that genre ?
i like trance sound in general but i dont go deep and this is totally strange and familiar in same time to my ears

here is my opinion ,and i could be wrong here since this new to me
the music itself is weird (in good way ),its like entering a vortex but with experimental key loops
the intro is nice and moody
the bassline is powerful
kicks and snare is good
this track can go either way to great track of waste of energy depending on your input and creative ideas
melodic keys with that solo key/pad sound running toe to toe with bassline is good but there should be more melodies there

i understand the track is in demo stage/and you are missing piano so i can advise to try kontakt or keyscape pianos
also try panning few keys left and right to give more appealing sound

good luck

 

have kontakt but no keyscape. yes it's a bit experimental stuff within progressive trance. i'm trying to expand or learn new aspects of music though.

 

Piano my ass, this is hot fire. My thoughts are it needs to be longer. The title "lone wolf" is not a good term these days however, it's a reference to a dick. Otherwise dopeness!!

 

it was long actually. the intro itself was slowly progressive and it was 2,2:30 mins long. but then i thought that it should be short. so i trimmed and edited. otherwise i usually make 4-5 min tracks. but if you like it then it's totally worth for me that i wasted tons of time on music. and people like you are loving it. so thanks I'm glad you liked it. i don't know what to say at the moment.

and yeah about the name. i wanted to name it "god bless people" or something like that. but my friend told me we should name it alone wolf so i thought let's do it. but i was strongly in favor of "god bless people".

 

OK, I'll take over the unpleasant truths,I hope you are aware that you have a long road ahead. Hard working road. You still sound very amateur. If you make it with projects like this, I would like to witness that.

 

I like the vocally sound and that square wave melody that comes in around 2 minutes. Personally I think the composition itself is quite good.

Where this could improve in my opinion is the texture of the sounds. I think the whole piece would benefit greatly from making the most prominent (saw pluck, LP'd saw bass) sounds a little less common/typical and a little more unique. But that's just me. Overall though it's good work

 

isnt that goa trance ? forgive me the question pls indianwebemperor

 

goa trance. i don't know. i don't categorise my stuff usually. it's just trance and whatever it should fall under that sub category. but thanks for replying. might be goa trance. who knows. I'm not from Goa :P.

 

making experimental tracks is good for the mind if you have certain
ideas like your demo here indianwebking

i remember last year i did a experimental and i tried few layers and that night i decided to make another track
after i played with few notes ,so i saved the demo under another project name and
worked on both projects with similar style ,in your case you CAN create another track out of that experimental track
with full concentration and remember this if you are making a trance style

the opening fade in/the build up(w or w/o vocals /the big melodies/dancing drum percussion/second lead melodies /fade out /boom out

try listening to AVB radio show ,it has fantastic upcoming talents with most creative trance tracks
and im sure you will have good brainstorm while listening to the show

i remember i met a friend of mine who was a dj at night club and he loves trance style
you know what he told me about making a trance song back in the 2007 ?

he said ''making a trance track is like drinking wine for the whole night ..you just cant go down to beers ,
you should have ''high standard'' in making a good track in trance style even for a 30 seconds of demo
can get you praises or yawns from listeners judging on your production/work making it
everything should be top notch from building to verse to bridge and so on ,and more than that when it comes to extended version
find something to hook the listeners in that extended section like new keys or guitar even a simple percussion can do the hook
do not add boring repetitive loops from start to finish ,that will kill your creativity

and i ll speak frankly here IWK ,i made all kind of experimental tracks from ambient/house/edm/rock
but even i didnt like those experimental because im trying to merge different styles in to one song
its like im making trance song with house-ish drums or minimal techno with weak ass kicks and average clap
without reverb ,trance songs should be big not small ,and i understand why gyro gearloose said it sounds like goa trance
because it hase very similar vibe ,try listening to old school goa trance from 2000s ,
it hase identical bridge in just like yours with strong bass+kicksnare combo

but if want something ,just listening to this armin van buuren - intense from start to finish

who said that trance style cant be very classical
GO violins GO

 

i have this track. it's freaking great. for me Armin is a bit out of league. because i can not think like him. for me i am like deadmau5 stuff. he's stuff is easy to do for me. while Armin is a bit whole mainstream trance.