New Tune , let me no what you think, It still needs a master.

Cheers Louis

 

I would add a chord variation for both the intro and the main part.

The centered synths/organ in the whole main part are too loud.

 

@No Avenger, Cheers, I think maybe i'll try some sus chords at the end of the progressions, that might sound nice, add something different.

 

Obviously, my favest, cutest, overgrownest kitteh is this one:

But this topic makes it a closer run thing than I'd ever expect!! XD