Hi

I just uploaded a new song to my soundcloud been producing for about 6 months and i got about 5 tracks almost ready too with the same style as this one im uploading here, whats your thoughts about this track?

https://soundcloud.com/pontuskallstrom/pontus-k-llstr-m-noll-kronor

 

Sounds pretty generic. But keep it up!

Add more (and better) melodic hooks, melodies and harmonies. You are swedish - use your sense of melody that you have genetically from all your ancestors who went to musikskolan. ;)
Use automation. Use variation. Use layering. Add vocals (friends or friends of friends who can sing).

 

Sounds very simple.
Add some mid-frequency instrument, arp, pad, chord, to enrich the harmonies.
Add some perc, fx, noise,reverb. Spend more time on mixing step.
The sidechain fx should match the beat, it sounds ambiguous.

 

I agree with the above comments it's simple and generic, but good job *yes*

In my opinion it needs to be fatter try adding more fx, arps, pads maybe some vocal stabs &
extra melodies also layer the lead to add some hiss to it, and it would be good to alternate the lead
or add another layer at the end to keep your ears from getting bored.


Good stuff, keep going

 

Thank you all for answering ill keep it up for sure next track will have more changes and add something new every like 8-16 bars. It will be out in a week or two its almost ready and it sounds fucking fat already.