First attempt ....Opinions are welcome

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  1. Mat O

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    An Orchestral Hybrid track i did very quickly.Your opinions and comments are welcome .
     
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  3. vaiman

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    Nice work, lots of emotion and dynamics. Especially dig the intro!
    When the percussion kicks in at 0:37 I'd either drop the volume, or more preferably add some reverb as they sound too dry and stick out too much. Same at 1:04. The rest of the instruments are very wet so these need to blend more.
     
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  4. Mat O

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    Vaiman,
    Thanks for the kind words and valuable suggestions:yes:.Will do as you suggested, and re upload.Waiting for some more feedback.
     
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  5. DJK

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    very nice indeed mate, into is sublime, rest of track is just lovely:wink::wink:
     
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  6. Mat O

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    Thank you DJK for the kind words of encouragement .Much appreciated.:yes:
     
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  7. KungPaoFist

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    Cool progression and sounds!
     
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  8. Mat O

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    Thank you KungPao :like: for listeninig and caring to comment.Much appreciated.
     
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  9. Kinghtsurfer

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    Nicely done! A different style for you... it works! :like:
     
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  10. flush with your foot

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    good choice of instruments, nice progression & nice atmosphere!
    Thank you for share.
     
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  11. peter21

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    Nice One :wink:
    Like all your tracks..
    2 small suggestions
    At 0.35 The blowing sound u could add a bit of vibrato to it or reverb or add more decay to extend it out..just a tad..
    Also the percussion seems to jump out at me a bit ..maybe put it a lil back in da mix..maybe u want it that way for effect..just a thought.
    But otherwise super track all it needs it a film ...Keep em' comin' :)
    cheers
     
    Last edited: May 7, 2019
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  12. Mat O

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    Thank you knight surfer.
     
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  13. Mat O

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    Thank you flush with your foot. Much appreciated :)
     
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  14. Mat O

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    Thank you peter 21 for the kind words and valuable thoughts.Vaiman also suggested the same.Will add vibrato to the winds and its actually a synth line layering the percussion that is poking out.Will do something about it.Much appreciated for showing interest.thank you:yes:
     
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