And here is the Mastered version:

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1xs_u2btZFGjhPeWK5CHZCSD6ryWgH9WK

i'd like your feedback on this, that would be appreciated.

Mix contest Link : https://rakrecordings.com/mixing-contest

PS: i ran out of cpu power so Synth part was not mixed.

 

Nothing ?

 

Sounds pretty good imo. I might turn down the chorus vocals a couple db (overpowering in earbuds) and eq top end of the kick a bit but I like the mix!

 

Yup @KungPaoFist has pretty much nailed the areas you might want to look into.
I hate the BD on this track - too busy, too clicky yet no real character, yuk. Just a personal taste thing i suppose...

 

overall balance: high end is loud. Make it sound a harsh or little hallow. I think it is a little low in the low end. Maybe this is caused by your headphone or monitor which is not flat.

Reference this track to fix this, It starts with bass, then drums, then guitars, so you can hear each:

Youtube version sounds better than master because of high end cutting done by lossy audio compression.

kick: high-end click is too loud or too compressed or too saturated (not clean). Unnatural and Irritating at times

 

Last edited: Mar 17, 2019

Low-end punch is lacking all around especially on the choruses. Smack on the kick is loud, sounds like it's the most important thing in the track based on the mix. SFX intro is louder than the 1st verse, 1st chorus gets quieter than the verse bass goes away almost. A bit heavy on the 2 buss compression. Cheers.

 

In addition to what's already been said, I prefer your more centered vocals approach, although they could sound more upfront.

Sadly your master is totally over compressed/limited and I stopped listening to it after some secs. Adjusted it has a LUFS of ~ -5.8 at -1dBTP and this is dead, completely dead.