Happy Slave (Demo 1) Opinions Please

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by kearnsy, Mar 7, 2013.

  1. kearnsy

    kearnsy Banned

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    Howdy all

    here's the first demo of a new track i'm working on called Happy Slave

    https://soundcloud.com/kearnsykearns/happy-slave-demo-1-original

    As always, let me know what you think, good or bad

    Merci
     
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  3. Burg

    Burg Newbie

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    Kearnsy

    I love this track.

    Your vocals are awesome. Your voice reminds of Ariel Pink on their last record.

    Feedback
    - This is a demo? do you plan to re-record? If so i would try to clean up the gtr just a bit .. unless you are going for the raw sound (which is cool too)
    - That's about it man. The core/essence of the tune is already there and awesome. So however you plan to develop it should make it even better.
     
  4. G String

    G String Rock Star

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    lol

    enjoyed it

    though I much prefer anti-capitalist over anti-state.
     
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