A track inspired by some ambient music and orchestral stuff.Opinions are welcome.

 

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Really good. Due to the structure it doesn't feel like a 6:20 song.

The bell sound on the right side is less audible in the second main part than in the first (especially at the end of the second main part). If that is on purpose, I would've made it the other way around to have a bit more of a climax.
Other than that, .

 

No Avenger, Thank you for listening.You are right, i will up the volume of the bell sound on the second main part and repost.

 

Ooh nice! Kept waiting for some surreal guitar riffs... And an anguished singer... But thats just my pink floyd hangover... Really cool bro!

Are the flowers in the songpic night flowers? They seem to be unhappy under the sun...

 

Really like the way it builds and builds as it goes along. Very dreamy.

 

Knightsurfer,
Thank you for the suggestions and generous words.
I have to ask my daughter about those flowers.I did not notice those unhappy flowers.Thank you for pointing that out.See, thats the difference, how a layman and an artist sees things.

 

Thank you for the comments Eliot Wilder.

 

Cool, love your work! i have juste a trouble (little) with bell notes melody progression from 3.16 to 5.00, not very important....
And the bell sound is a bit less.
Have a nice and musical day!

 

Hey
flush with your foot,
Thank u for listening and commenting.
Do you mind suggesting something regarding the bell melody?.Actually i am not even sure about the need of that bell melody progression. What do you think? Will it work with out the melody progression?.I tried without it.Felt something was missing.So i put it back. Reading your comments is making me rethink my decision.