Hello my dear friends!

Here's a more rousing track (I think) from me... Hope you guys are roused! (Not aroused )

On playback, I believe I squashed it too much... Pls beware of the master volume... Sorry...

I am thankful for any feedback

Thanks!

 

Last edited: Nov 29, 2018

Thanks to @Grok , @devilorcracker and @LZ Jaydon for the

 

Oops, too late - for my neighbours.

Well, that, err, interesting violin melody(?) could use more variety, aswell as the entire track.

The guitars sound a bit like a background noise at this low level.

 

@Kinghtsurfer nice composition & thanks for sharing
On the technical side of things :
There is a "resonating" frequency on the "violin" that needs to be taken down a bit,pay close attention to the drums/toms & make them more punchy,as this is the element of the track that gives it energy.The guitars can benefit from eqing them more in the mix,do some m/s processing to them, pushing them on the "sides" so your drums/vocal/violin can sit in the "mids" creating more space for all parts.Overall mix/master is too bright.Transition @ 1:18-1:20 is super & works great

 

Actual mix notes! Now we are cooking

 

It's defo rousing! Does what it says! I guess as a piece of music, it's a bit repetitive, kept expecting the folksy "reel" to take off and fly somewhere in a cheesy, soaring, crazy-melody-riff kinda way. It was pretty much just a loop :o which disappointed a bit. Kept expecting strings to swell and timpani to smash my face and body. Maybe even flutes? (Which might have been a bit too much.. =) Snare sound was a bit boxy and lacked some punch like the lovely @Spyfxmk2 said, except accurately.

 

Thanks all!

@No Avenger thanks for listening and the input!

@Spyfxmk2 ... Thanks very much my friend... That is great advice! i will apply these ideas to the mix!

@famouslut ...thanks... So make it less repetitive is the consensus... Got it!

@KungPaoFist ... Thanks for listening and the like!

 

Last edited: Nov 30, 2018