Melodical music. Free download. Honest feedback needed.

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by tiranz, Feb 17, 2013.

  1. tiranz

    tiranz Newbie

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    Hello audiosex forumers. I have created melodical music with experimentation idea in it. There are something i tried on this track. Vintage movie vocal added at initial part of music. Have fun and feel free to download and share with other friend of yours via facebook,twitter or anything.Thank you. :wink:
    [media]https://soundcloud.com/t-ren/t-ren-remembrance-original[/media]
     
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  3. Qbert

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    tedious
     
  4. tiranz

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    Qbert may i know what is tedious.
     
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    Nice track, really like the drums and atmosphere...

    The vocals may be too soft. The beginning vocal and at the end.

    That one note piano, 1/8 note you hit really fast. It annoys me, i dont like it. It would be better if that fast hitting piano note was gone i think...

    Overall a nice track bro' :wink:
     
  6. tiranz

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    Devlin thanks for the feedback. I thought the 1/8 note will be suitable for main groove background, you know to indicate that main groove is coming.

    The vintage vocal is just for the fun. Just to create the presence of human speech in the music.

    Thx man.
     
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    Seems very repetitive.. and the mix is kinda muddy, and feels over-processed.

    My 2Pence.
     
  8. sixxstrings

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    I enjoyed it! Nice melody and beat :)
     
  9. RobO

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    Kinda nice, Loop Driven, the one note repetition may need to have volume fade in and out instead of constant as it plays, I get your idea. Gives a tension vibe then relief then back again. As the track progresses, I find myself searching for which sound to focus on then move. Is this your intention ? like hear is the melody, it fades or out, now hear is the next focus, and then this, and a quick hear, and
    your ear gets candy from piano, vocals, pad, drum hit instead of big wash of notes, frequency and tones. Overall, Pretty good, Keep up the good work. What DAW or process used ?
     
  10. Yuri

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    Sadly you're about four years too late with that question.
     
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