Hey guys,
I found this old track I made last year and I'm thinking of finally getting some lyrics for it. I'd love to hear some comments before I get started mixing.
http://playstopgo.com/temp/Dirty-preview.mp3

Thank you!

 

Wow, short file of 15 seconds?

Sounds great, nothing original. 128 bpm, voice, the chords cliche. But that's okay, if you have a nice 'drop' afterwards or a really good vocal, it could be something nice. Otherwise it is just another housesong.

Productionwise it sounds okay to me...

 

Thanks, but what 15 seconds? The track has almost 4 minutes.

 

Mmmmm, you are right.

Again, production wise it is okay. Only cliche chords and rhythm, probably starts even in the key of C.

You need a hook lead synth. And if you want vocals, you probably make a song. And most EDM songs, has verse chorus verse chorus bridge chorus structure. So the chords must change. You need at least a bridge then.

 

Thank you Devlin. Do you have any of your tracks online? I'd love to learn by example.