So after going through a couple month long battle with procrastinating and doing everything I could to distract myself from actually working, I finally sat down and made a track.

I locked myself in my room for the past 2 days and did my best to flesh out an idea for a song.... start to finish.

I usually just work on little loops or sound design for a while, save the set and never touch it again while moving on to the next one. This has gotten me no where for approximately 2 years.

Anyways, I was tired of calling music my passion, and not having anything to show for it in terms of completed track.

So here it is! the first completed track start to finish I think I have made in about a year.

Its still a rough draft and there is still some stuff I am planning to change. But, I would really like any and all criticism.... the tougher the better, as I want to get better as a producer!

Anyways, thanks for listening guys!

Edit: new updated link... last one was the wrong file.

Code:

http://www.mediafire.com/?u8ch0qzbw8u2hpu

Code:

http://soundcloud.com/b-raynz/haunted-first-draft

 

Anyone?

 

Nice track, sounds decent mix and mastering to me.

If you like more comments, it would be a good idea to upload the song the a file hoster which can stream, not puch people will take time to download music from somebody they don't know.

 

Thanks manducator! I appreciate the reply.

I posted it on soundcloud.. which seems to degrade the quality even more.. but what the heck.. here ya go

http://soundcloud.com/b-raynz/haunted-first-draft

 

2 days well spent i say. The mix was superb. Really enjoyed this track.

The only nit i have, is that it became a little repetitive after the three minute mark. Maybe break and have a piano solo or something towards the middle. Apart form that, is was excellent.

Best
Mark.