Another unfinished Demo. This is my last for now. I promise

 

Another lovely tune... You are on a roll! I love your singing... Its got a warm kindly sincerity about it... Great work!

 

Hey Kinghtsurfer nice of you to say, thanks man.
I just wish that I had the energy and mojo to actually finish most of my efforts!
I reckon that I need a songwriting partner to actualize these tunes and make them into something way half decent.

 

I like this one too!
It might sound silly, but...I could here Ringo Starr singing this song.

 

To be honest. I'd like to be under the sea in a little hideaway beneath the waves
Cheers again Super. It's nice to get a wee bit of feedback mate.
Very much appreciated

 

OMG - I had some weird flashback to val doonican

 

was ringo "tanked" or "underwater" in an octopus garden ?

 

Brill Man. Love it!
I sort of thought along those lines myself with this one

 

Yeah he was in an Octopuses Garden beneath the waves.

 

"Goodnight" comes to mind!

 

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Very enjoyable, very nice.

Could be very great, could be intensely beautiful, I think, depending on production work.

 

You have a beautiful voice, which needs more rehearsals I would think, to find the accuracy and confidence it needs.
So : what you need could be only working more

(supposing you're the kind of person that gets better with rehearsals, because in life I found some persons that are quite good only the first try, but then worst and worst, rehearsals do nothing with these individuals )

 

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I agree that I need more rehearsals Grok.
Critisism is very welcome and if I had more energy and more conviction then I could maybe pull off something halfway to decent possibly.
Thanks for your comments mate. Much appreciated

 

Production is everything really! It is the difference between a hit or a flop.

 

In these modern times, we're happy to have at disposal all the needed tools to build great productions.
"Unfortunately", this needs also knowledge and experience : a lot of work and/or fine companions !...

What seems positive with you, is that you seem gifted with a good self-criticism and down-to-earth attitude ; if you had a corresponding energy and motivation, it could lead you to very fine realisations. Maybe you could need some fine companions, working alone is pretty hard and making breathless sometime. Or maybe not, all depends.

 

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I must say I do agree Grok.
We can all possess certain gifts but we also need motivation to turn these gifts into something special.
Working alone can make one lazy and indifferent to these positives.
If we have no one to bounce ideas off then it's hard to know if something self produced is really worthwhile pursuing.
A song/musical partner can help in bouncing ideas and also to validate them.
Thank you for your input mate. You're a good guy and I appreciate these kinds of conversations.