Can yall give me some feedback on my new concept?
Don't hold back on me, please tell me exactly how you feel about it *yes*

MY CONCEPT!

p.s. i need to change up the snare sample for a better sounding one imo. if yall have any more tips, please feel free to give them

Peace from Amsterdam!

 

I like the spacial effect - but listening with my headphones on i hear the bass sounds distorted.
Maybe the drums are too much in the front. Check the bass frequencies & remove some.

Porter Robinson - Language sounds also good - but the mix isn't balanced.

If you know some German i recommend you this clip with Mastering Engineer Klaus Bohlmann :

 

Hi Amsterdam Pirat,

May be you don t have to change the snare, but mix it bit more "inside".

IMO you should look for a second melodic idea, to get the tune a bit less linear.

The bass does not seems so distorted to me, listening with Beyerdynamic 880 Pro.

The basic idea is interesting anyway

Hope this helps