i just wanted to share a track i working on!

Enjoy!

//DD

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Made me from 0:16 on. Could benefit from a second part, though. Keep on working.

 

unbelievably horrible...still probably better than my stuff

 

I don't know much about Hardstyle, but the melody is catchy! Like 'No Avenger' said, a second part is needed. You're on the right path I'd say.

 

I like a bit of hardstyle

 

The melody is very good, well within the style. It would be ok if you could hear the kick drive the song when it comes in, bass too. Bring those sidechains please
And excuse me for saying so, but there 's nothing Acid about your track mate. It's happy and epic if i may say so.
Some hard style acid here:

And some more old school acid:

 

Last edited: Jul 8, 2018

This isn't exactly the kind of music that I would listen but it was interesting. Well done.

 

I am not into 99.835% OF EDM music, but I can appreciate it, when the synths aren't bludgeoning me in the face.
I like that you have avoided the mistake that I hear in a lot of genres, but especially EDM, which is making every element of the song *way too busy. This track relies as much on the texture of the instruments as it does a complimenting melody. I think that drums and percussion could easily push and pull dynamic changes in this song quite easily since the music is solid. I do agree with No Avenger on that it could benefit from a second part, though I think that, if you deicde to make a second part, detouring to drastically from what you have would be a mistake. Also, just an idea, at the part at :54, or at the 2/3rds mark somewhere where you could put a change, maybe do something very basic that really drops it back down, something with very simple drums and vox like at :04 in your track "Oh!" --kind of mellow, but still anthem-y.
Just my two cents....