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And now the remix:

 

Last edited: Jul 2, 2018

Nice tune, well played.
Bass is too loud, no bass drum (???), snare moved to the right side needs getting used to.

 

Nice where are you getting the horns? They are a bit to hysteric (put a low pass on it) and maybe compress the transient. they pop out of nowhere! PM me if you need help.

D.

 

Thanks for your feedback guys.

@No Avenger ,
The bass is indeed a tad too loud, will have to do something about that.
The kick drum is present but now that you are mentioning it, not loud enough apparently.
I was unaware of this rule of the snare placement so I put it in the right side...

@GodHimSelf ,
The horns are from the Session Horns sample lib.
I have to admit that I have no clue regarding what you wrote therefore I sent you a PM as you kindly suggested.

 

Last edited: Jun 29, 2018

very nice @mrpsanter thank you for sharing

 

Thanks @Spyfxmk2 ,
Glad you like it.

 

@mrpsanter ... this is quite lovely... awesome tune!

Agree with No Avenger's feedback on bass being too loud and the absence of a discernable kick drum... the latter would add a lot to the track...

Love the horns...

Great work!

 

Thanks @Kinghtsurfer, much appreciated.

Guess what, you and the others in the thread just convinced me: I will attempt to remaster my track and get back for round two.

Will be back soon, stay tuned!

 

indeed that bass is pumping.. but this is my style of music... loved the funky phased guitar sounds..and dirty EP...

very exuberant.... just needs a little taming and polishing..

 

Funky!

 

Ok, the remix is up: Please let me know what you think.

 

Last edited: Jul 2, 2018

Definitely better.
I would separate the low frequencies of bass and bass drum a bit more (lower the bass freqs in favor of the bass drum) and give both of them a bit more upper mids. And for my taste the guitar, brass and organ are too loud compared to the drums.

 

Sounds much clearer now... Glad to hear that kick!

Still feel the bass could be pulled back a little more... And drums could be more forward...

Much enjoy anyways...