Hi Guys. I would like to know what do you think about this little song. It's just an idea.

Thanks....
https://www.dropbox.com/s/t98jrf5sum4t07t/ZygousBeat - Coming Down.mp3?dl=0

 

I think it´s ready for the recycle bin.

 

One man's trash is another man's come up!
I really believe, once it's finished, it'll find some listeners. Keep on Maduka

 

Thanks brother for your positive comment.

 

@Maduka Firstly, I want to thank you for posting your song. I like the overall "idea". As @complete said, "once it is finished it will find some listeners". You have taken the first step and should not be discouraged by any comments that we make. Never give up!

 

Thanks TonyG. I appreciate your words.

 

Thanks for sharing @Maduka
What i think about it : it is a very nice idea/track ,the bass can be improved, maybe a different line ? 808 ? also if you ever do a remix of it, a trap(electronic/edm) drop would work nicely

Bravo !

 

I really like it .......well worth developing

 

Thanks brother. I will consider everything.

 

Yeah brother. Thanks brother

 

Interesting track. Gets a thumbs up from me.
It's not my genre, so no critique or advice, but at least it's got an individual sound.
I can't bear listening to those pieces people put up that all sound the same, like if they were all connected you'd think it was one really long tedious effort. Same instruments, same quiet intro follow by the same burrr burrrr bass line, samey tiddly pom pish drum breaks and predictable pauses and rises. Well done.

 

Thanks Bro...

 

Well...since you were brave enough to ask...

I find it boring, cookie cutterish, under developed and with weak sounding instrumentation.

On the positive side of things, I applaud you for making some sound until you refine your production. It is a good start.

Never give up the fight! Even a rock can become a Diamond.

 

Sister, not brother, just for the books.

You asked about the idea, so I'll stick to it. I like it up to 1:16. The last part doesn't fit so well until now, but up to 1:16 it made me smile.

 

Last edited: May 8, 2018

If this is a sketch.. and I imagine it with a boost on production... why not? Would like the sound less generic (it's ok for presenting an idea..), think about the tempo too.. (btw, what/who are your influences..?)

I vote - It's worth developing! ..like sister said ;)

Pro tip: you'll need a convertible, 3 chicks and a hipster filter for the video.. ;D

 

Thanks guys for yours comments and thoughts. Like i said its just an sketch that started with the vocal, but I will try to develop it

 

This is promising... Take it further... Make it bigger... Nice...

 

It kinda sucks at this early stage and sounds way too dry. But it also has everything needed to become a summer banger

Gotta energize it up some like those guys did:

Stonebank feat Emel - Stronger
Stanton Warriors feat Sporty-O - Bushido

Good luck!