Feedback are always welcome! Cheers!

 

Love your production chops... This one takes me straight back to my childhood... Sounds great... I only dont like the autotuned/variaudioed effect on the lead vocals... But that is a heavily personal bias...

Great job all around!

 

If anybody would like to master let me know,,,-- Thanx

 

I enjoyed it a lot!

 

really nice, an almost perfect demo-track. the tuned vocals works well, the whole track is perfect for what it is. I would do a couple of small vocal retakes and get the vocals/track mixed professionally and release it as a cover. it would get airtime and with some club edits and not to wild remixes you may have a small (?) summer hit. cheers


edit: for instance the way you phrase at 0:53 "too meee.." is lacking. most of the other phrasing is nice. the vocals need to get mixed by someone who knows hes/her thing, you have done a nice job but i think you need an experienced mixer. it would put it where it needs to be. also, if you want choose a cover that fits the lightness of the track, not a depressing black and white art.

so, some small rounding maybe here and there and then its a wrap

 

Last edited: Apr 27, 2018

Enjoyed it a lot.

 

Mastered version.. Too compressed?