I´m new here and like to share my work with your experience and knowledge!
Critics and opinions are very welcome! Cheers

https://soundcloud.com/user-601292892/cronia02

 

friendly greetings @DIONISIO & welcome to the forum

nice composition
the drums give energy to the track,but the repetitive drum fills take away from the theme/melody imho
once again welcome

 

Hello Dionisio and welcome to AudioZ!

As soon as I saw your avatar name, I knew I would like what you do.
I'm just having a bottle of red wine and starting to play with my gear here. :P

About Cronia02. I really like what I hear there as an idea, your vision, but the mix could be better. The thing that bothers me the most is main drums. They are drowned in reverb so much that you can't hear them properly. There's also too much ~4-5kHz on them, especially the kick. Toms sound good, although a bit too repetitive, like spyfx said. The main drums should be more present. Maybe try using gate on the reverb and compress the drums on a separate drum bus to bring them closer a bit. Aside from the drums, I think the mix sounds pretty good, although a bit too limited for my taste and for that genre. The parts that should be a bit more quiet , like acoustic guitar, for example, sounds too loud.

Keep it up! I'd like to hear some more from you.

And yes, CHEERS!

 

Olá e adeus de Portugal!!!

 

Thank you very much for your comments and advice!
Sorry for my limited english it´s not my native language!! Cheers

 

Rapaz, muito boas as tuas músicas. Parabéns e seja benvindo!

 

Muito Obrigado! Abraço.

 

Olá e adeus de England !

 

É isso man continua.. Com o tempo vais melhorando cada vez mais.. Ya tenta tornar a batida mais presente e com menos reverb.. podes aplicar só reverb longo a 1 ou 2 elementos na batida.. o resto mais reverb curto.. e processa os synths para alargar mais a imagem stereo.. e talvez mais um pouco de impacto nos subs..

Abraço aqui de Portugal!

 

Benvenuto a bordo !

 

Hello!

This is a nice composition... especially liked the beginning of it.

As mentioned earlier, once the drums kick in, the track loses separation and gets a little muddy. Also, perhaps the drums get a little repetitive.

So, great work overall! Hope to hear more!

Cheers